i had great difficulty containing my laughter at the office. apologies for being a wet blanket, but the second line has 8 syllables. maybe write it: Just 35 calories? even the sistine chapel ceiling has critics.
Oh, thank you. I wasn't even sure what a Haiku was exactly, so I had to look it up. I thought I counted 7 syllables, but I guess I didn't try very hard! My fingers were to greasy from the bacon...
i had great difficulty containing my laughter at the office. apologies for being a wet blanket, but the second line has 8 syllables. maybe write it: Just 35 calories? even the sistine chapel ceiling has critics.
ReplyDeleteOh, thank you. I wasn't even sure what a Haiku was exactly, so I had to look it up. I thought I counted 7 syllables, but I guess I didn't try very hard! My fingers were to greasy from the bacon...
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